Sunday, January 24, 2021

SKP: Gliederung -- Analytical Outline of "Sketch"

 

“A Sketch of the Past”: Gliederung  

 ()= sections MS is broken into by spacing in MOB, 2nd ed.

 

64  (1)  Sunday April 16th, 1939

         First Memories: flowers on dress, waves, blind (mother and balcony), ripe garden and bees

65   Meditation on memories

66   Passion flowers…paint these first impressions.  Rooks cawing. Rapture of garden

67   Looking glass shame; Gerald’s abuse à70

70   Digression on moments of being vs. non-being (cotton wool)

71   Shocks:  fighting wi Thoby;  the flower is the whole; apple-tree and death

72   Philosophy of life: pattern behind cotton wool

73   Description of three characters she remembers from childhood (caricature) à 74

 

74  (2) May 2nd, 1939

Meditation on contrast btw past and present

75   Long description of Kensington Gardens in contrast to walks around St. Ives;

red and purple air balls; the Flower Walk

77   lost Cornish luggar

78   Two important moments of being: puddle in the path; idiot boy

 

79 (3) Bright memories of mother, always including a circle of the scene

79--Driven to growth like a plant

80 – moments wh bound her to other people; Mother and writing TTL. “invisible presences”

81 – review of memories of mo: touch, sight, hearing,

82 – move from minute detail to generalization abt her beauty--

 

85 (4) May 15, 1939. – turn to May 1895: death of mo

Platform of time

89   (5)  comparison of two husbands

91   (6) death

 

91  (7) May 28th 1939. 

How her mother’s death made her perceptions more intense:

92   Kiss, cold iron; smell of flowers

93   Paddington Station, reading poem

94   Shrouded life after mo’s death: all in black vs laburnum; cave of Virginia Creeper

 

95  (8) June 20, 1939: crossing the channel

Thinking abt Stella;

96   list of people who’ve died; mo and Stella: sun and moon

97   Old cow; cow parsley, white roses

 

98   (9) July 19th, 1939. – surface sliding over depths of past

99  Stella’s lovers: Jim, Jack Hills

 

100 (10) June 8th 1940; break of nearly a year. MS in garbage; battle at crisis

Memories of Stella and Jack Hills

103 Passage abt Jack Hills’ frankness abt sex

104           teaching them abt butterflies

105           red red rose of love

106            Nessa; the Greek slave years

107           Stella’s marriage and death

 

107   (11) Sept 22nd, 1940. Fall of France, turn to her father

108           Discussion of ambivalence

109           violent temper

 110          frustrated desire to be a man of genius

 

115 (12) Mecklenburg Sq July, 1940

115           Father as a writer

116           The cage of 22 Hyde Park Gate in July 1897

 

124 (13)  18th August 1940. –German raiders over MH

125           Thoby

 

126 (14) 22nd September 1940

         St. Ives.    Description of town

129           Description of Talland House

131           Pilchards and Regatta

132           Sophie’s kitchen

133           walks around St. Ives

 

136 (15) October 11th 1940

Memories of Thoby

137                  affects of early deaths on her

138                  Thoby and Shakespeare;

139                  how reserved they were with one another; how there was never any sense of how he felt sexually        

140                  Return to Stella’s death; the leafless tree

141                  Garden scene at Fritham wi George Duckworth

George saying that Vanessa was in love wi Jack but couldn’t marry him

142                  Scene making as a literary device

 

143 (16) November 15th 1940   ---Close conspiracy with Vanessa

144                  Wednesday account books; father’s demands for sympathy

147                  model day at HPG

148                  social demands of the evening;

150                  problems with dressing well

151                  Long passage describing George Duckworth in great detail

153                  great patriarchal machine

153                  Lack of social success; George’s disappointment

157                  Division btw convention (downstairs) and intellect (upstairs)

158                  Memories of the world of intellectual visitors: 

159                  contrasts between different worlds

 

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